Building Walls (C&C Welcome)

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Here's a shot I got outside my house today. I don't think it's exactly perfect, but it definitely plays with my eye.

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C&C's are welcomed.

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Pretty cool. I wish there was either more to it or it was tighter in some way, but still very neat.
 
I like the general idea, but the parapet wall creates a strong boundary that prevents my eye from exploring the entire image. When I first look at this, my eye goes right to the foreground and is then trapped by that strong line. I like the idea you have above the line, with the brick wall and the sky being divided by the vent stack, but that bottom foreground is so strong I can't really look at it the way I should be able to.

- Randy
 
Great shot, but it play's with my eyes a little to, gives me a headache, or was that all the beer I drank last night?....I really like it though, I don't know why, but I do.:thumbup:

j.:mrgreen:
 

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