C&C a few of these bad boys for me. Thanks

[fatmikey916]

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DSC_0040(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

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DSC_0035(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

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DSC_0031(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

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DSC_0023(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

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DSC_0010(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

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DSC_0007(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

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DSC_0030(2) by fatmikey916, on Flickr

 

[mommy-medic]

Uneducated feedback- to me, the airplane trails in the sky are very distracting. In the first couple pics I'm confused as to what you are trying to get a pic of- in the cropped ones, it's MUCH better.

#1 is dark

#4 has a tree to the right in the shot that detracts from the distance of the shot

#5 has a tall piece of grass or a weed in the shot. Were you trying for that?

Is there any way to shoot this without the fence? (is there a similar location sans fence?)

Overall I like them and don't mean to be negative or nit-pick, but I think cropping and pulling weeds may help.

 

[fatmikey916]

the weeds photo was on purpose. i was just trying to get a lot of angles. There is no spot without a fence as it is a bluff and is fenced off to keep people from falling off of it haha. Thanks for the input regardless