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I think you should have more have the card in the pic. The random blotches of white are a bit distracting too.
 
I went for a soft look. KIS, you know.
 
The softness is very appealing. The upside-down card gets nearly all my attention, however, especially the text (it doesn't matter that I cannot read the language), and that's probably not the desired effect. I keep wondering "why" it's upside-down. Well, perhaps that's the whole point of the photo: a rejection, set amidst flowers. The composition is very well executed and feels good. There are some odd outlines around shapes, but I'm too inexperienced and unable to identify what's going on.

Overall, I like this a lot.
 

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