C&C B&W Window Shot

[beautiful.blood]

Would love to get some feedback on composition and exposure. Nothing fancy just me by the window and using that as the light source.

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[Craig G]

First one has better light than the second.

 

[freybear3]

i wasn't able to get the first photo to load.

you need to tilt the camera a little higher, your top of your head is chopped off.