C&C: First "object" test shots

[adversus]

I took some shots today of some stuff I had around the house, using a makeshift setup (I'm used to shooting outdoors, so this setup is new to me).

Basically a folding card table setup in front of a bookcase, with a black blanket draped over the bookcase and table.

Lighting was natural light from a nearby window, on-camera flash (D5000), and a small crappy articulating desk lamp that I happened to have. These are 100% learning shots for me, hence the subject matter is not very interesting

My problems I see are:
1. I need better lighting
2. My angles are off. When I was setting up everything looked plumb, but the results are clearly not level
3. Probably need better focusing/DOF

Any comments are appreciated!

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[Live_free]

All look to be either off focus or really soft focus....

 

[rallysman]

I think you already know what needs some improvement. I agree with what you see.

 

[iBats]

If you brightened up the bowl in 1 i believe that it would be an excellent shot, the rest on the other hand could use some recomposition

 

[pbelarge]

Rub the budha's belly, that will help with your luck for the next go round. :mrgreen: