C&C Of pretty girl

[zabulondesigns]

Feedback much appreciated :blushing:
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[Trever1t]

I'd like them a little bigger, my old eyes strain to see such small photos.

 

[westerngirl14]

Bigger would definitely be better... when they're that small its hard to give accurate C&C!!! (And I probably shouldn't be giving C&C anyway, because I'M not a pro -just learning- )

but here's my take on these pictures (from what I can gather from such small images)

#1 is not composed ideally. There is too much dead space above her head, and the picture would have improved greatly with all of her arms showing, not cut off that way. Also would be nice to see what she's holding onto better. People don't stand in that hunched shoulder position without something to lean on, and when we can't see it, it just makes the picture look awkward.

I like #2 much better, though from what I can see, her face could use more light on the right side, where her eye is in shadow. A reflector maybe? But I like the pose, and whatever it is she's on top of! Pretty model.

 

[zabulondesigns]

Bigger would definitely be better... when they're that small its hard to give accurate C&C!!! (And I probably shouldn't be giving C&C anyway, because I'M not a pro -just learning- )

but here's my take on these pictures (from what I can gather from such small images)

#1 is not composed ideally. There is too much dead space above her head, and the picture would have improved greatly with all of her arms showing, not cut off that way. Also would be nice to see what she's holding onto better. People don't stand in that hunched shoulder position without something to lean on, and when we can't see it, it just makes the picture look awkward.

I like #2 much better, though from what I can see, her face could use more light on the right side, where her eye is in shadow. A reflector maybe? But I like the pose, and whatever it is she's on top of! Pretty model.

Thanks I didn't even pay attention to the fact it may look better if you could see what shes leaning on. Thank god I have a picture showing it. #2 she was on top of a man hole cover lol. Also I use photobucket and put in the image code I have no idea how to make it bigger.

 

[kasperjd4]

#1 is not composed well. Too much dead space on top. But the lighting is nice.

#2 I am not a fan of. The shot could have worked if you shot from a different angle & had her arms and legs posed differently. Again there is too much dead space. You could have shot this landscape orientation. I think you should try it again, but right now it makes me feel like she's popping a squat.