C&C please - my first photos :)

Martusia · Mar 1, 2011

C&C please for my first photos

Welcome everyone. I'm neeebie

I got my camera 3 months ago Nikon D90. Since then I'm the happiest person ever

I love take a pictures. I post few .I would love to get as much feedback and tips as you can possible give me so I can improve my skills

thank you very much
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ghaith.salih · Mar 1, 2011

Great pictures and beautiful colors

Only the corners need to study more

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This picture the colors exquisite, but the configuration Bhjah to think more than possible to work to buy the lens petition to get the effect of different and beautiful

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I liked this picture very much and I loved

Auburngirl · Mar 1, 2011

They are all lovely! I know thats really the type of feedback you want but I wanted to share the compliment! The last 2 of the bridge are my favorites.

tirediron · Mar 1, 2011

C&C per req:

Welcome - your pictures show a creative eye and a good understanding of the basics of composition. A few thoughts: #1 - overly saturated. An excellent leading line, but it leads nowhere obvious. The clock needs to be a much more visible element to really work. #2: Very nice in an abstract sort of way. #3: Over-saturated on the crawler, and consider using a much larger aperture to render the background out of focus to make it less distracting. #4: The flower is competeing with the background and DoF is insufficient. #5: This, IMO, is your only really weak composition. A slight adjustment in position could have eliminated the blue background which clashes strongly with the rest of the pink/purple. #6/7: I think these would be better with a wider field of view.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

Martusia · Mar 1, 2011

Thank you very much. I wish i could shot more. I have my camera 3 months but i can shot just once a week on Saturdays because im working and photography is my passion

so i do not have much experience and im trying to improve my skills by showing you guys my photos get feedback and fix mistakes

Martusia · Mar 1, 2011

Awsome thank you forl all tips. I agree im not a pro with a lightroom yet haha. also if it comes to my dog he fell asleep an my boyfriends legs and i didnt wnted move him too much so i quickly puted hat on him and snap picture

if it comes to flower - that was my first picuter taken

but its sentimental to me even if its not perfect. Thannnnnk you again thats the feed back I need

Also i do not have much equipment yet but im getting there. Im glad you liked them Thank you again

Breaux · Mar 1, 2011

You have a very good eye for composition and interesting angles. Tirediron already gave you good specific feedback, so I'll just add this: make the effort to learn about how apertures, ISO, and shutter speeds affect the image, if you haven't already, so that you can use your own creative brain instead of the camera's.

The one with weakest composition may be my favorite: that puppy is just so cute!

Martusia · Mar 1, 2011

Thank you. Yes im still practice with shutter iso and apature

it just 3 months and i understand i cannot learn everything in one week

thats y i need you guys to tell me what im doing wrong

ot Right

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with my dog Rocky shooting its very dificult haha he fell asleep on the couch with my boyfriend so i run qiuck and grabed some accesories but as soon as i started to touch him he start to move so thats the best what i got that day haha

.Your friend gave me great tips and exellent feedback which i can learn with . I really apparciate it

The only thing i need to translate some word because I do not understand all of it

But this way I will learn English too

Thank you. just for fun I wanted to show you how Rocky looked that day b4 i woke him up with second shot

This pink blanket behind Rocky its my boyfriend naping - I didnt took pic of him - he didnt look as cute as Rocky hahaha
thank you guys

Martusia · Mar 1, 2011

Thank you

SupNY · Mar 1, 2011

Muy bien, I especially love the yellow Caterpillar digger one :thumbup:

UnderThePink · Mar 1, 2011

Very cool! Love 4 and 5....and 7? Wow.....I swear If I look long enough I just might see a ghost in that mist =P Very creepy/cool looking!

Martusia · Mar 3, 2011

Haha that's good

yes it was very foggy that day but I took pictures during the day but this dark look I got using lightroom. Funny you said that now I'm looking for ghost in there lol

inaka · Mar 3, 2011

Excellent composition, DoF and color palette. You're a natural there for sure.
Even the sleeping Yorkie pic is great because the depth of field and clear focus on the dog elevate this pic on many levels.

Great shots.