C&C please - On the rocks

[michael9000000]

If the resolution is too low for C&C, I can upload a higher res photo.

 

[SwirlMe]

Not a bad shot

 

[PinkDoor]

Not my favorite. It looks like she was sitting on the rocks, and you just happen to walk up and take her picture. Her feet are overly awkward. I do not LOVE my edit - but I think this crop improves the photo.

 

[Guinness Man]

I shoot a lot of beach stuff so heres what I think:

1. Good job on the lighting. I HATE shadows so either you shot it with cloud cover or used a fill flash. Either way that's nicely done
2. Girls NEVER know what to do with their hands so the sometimes do bizarre things with them. In this case they aren't badly placed but... see how shes putting some weight on them? Then notice her tricep. Its bulging a little bit. Keep it feminine and weight on the feet. (Unless you're shooting a fitness model)
3. A little arch in the back would accent the chest and tuck the belly. (I know its not a bikini shot so the point is negligible, but an option to think about)

 

[michael9000000]

I shoot a lot of beach stuff so heres what I think:

1. Good job on the lighting. I HATE shadows so either you shot it with cloud cover or used a fill flash. Either way that's nicely done
2. Girls NEVER know what to do with their hands so the sometimes do bizarre things with them. In this case they aren't badly placed but... see how shes putting some weight on them? Then notice her tricep. Its bulging a little bit. Keep it feminine and weight on the feet. (Unless you're shooting a fitness model)
3. A little arch in the back would accent the chest and tuck the belly. (I know its not a bikini shot so the point is negligible, but an option to think about)

Dude, you're a beach photo Jedi as far as I'm concerned... Do the bikini models call you Master, like Yoda?

Thanks for the input.

 

[Jaemie]

The flash doesn't match the natural light well enough, or maybe it's too harsh. I don't mind her slightly awkward pose. It's playful and natural I think, although I agree with Guinness Man's analysis. Oh and, I love barefoot girls, so the first thing I noticed was the Jamaican flag and my eye wandered from that point onward.

 

[Guinness Man]

Dude, you're a beach photo Jedi as far as I'm concerned... Do the bikini models call you Master, like Yoda?

Thanks for the input.

Haha Thanks No they dont but Im going to start demanding that. LOL