C&C please:)

[waynegz1]

Heres 1 I took tonight. I just got a new light stand and shoot through umbrella. So I decided to have my lady be my subject.

This is my first time dealing with a shoot through umbrella.

Note: I only have 1-SB600 that was camera left.

1/125th sec
f/ 4
ISO 600

Thanks in advance.

 

[Davor]

pretty good results for one sb600, any reflectors being used?

 

[waynegz1]

I did not use a reflector, now that I think of it I should have. Dammit!

 

[waynegz1]

50 views and only 1 response? C'mon guys/gals help me out!

 

[sanderso]

:thumbup: Its shows where my lighting skills need to get to.

 

[wlbphoto]

Looks like a good photo. She's cute btw

 

[bazooka]

The face looks very strange to me... I'm wondering what the SOOC shot looks like. I'd guess you over did the processing... maybe the teeth and eyes are too white?

 

[waynegz1]

Interesting... I actually didn't touch her teeth or eyes. just bumped contrast, and soften skin a bit.

I wonder what it could be?

 

[Ashleigh80]

I think it looks fine....I just think that is how her teeth are.

 

[Stradawhovious]

You might have done well to get her off the wall by a foot or two. I find that shadow and weird texture to be distracting.

But that's just me, and I really don't know what I'm talking about... so take it for what it's worth.

 

[FransD]

love it . The photo looks 'natural.' the imperfection makes is good.

 

[Rit]

Nice picture, does she have a twin sister? JK! I think there's a little 'imbalance' with her face aka just the angle she's looking at. The right side of the face appears 'longer/wider' compared to her left side. But other than that, the balance/lighting/etc. worked great. :thumbup:

 

[gsgary]

Can't see she has a white sheet in the way

 

[RedWylder]

beautiful lady, beautiful picture...unfortunately my untrained eye is no use to helping you improve but I do like her look and naturalness.

 

[ryan_caldero]

beautiful lady, beautiful picture...unfortunately my untrained eye is no use to helping you improve but I do like her look and naturalness.

Hey dude where did you aim for the focus point? Were you shooting manual mode?