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adamjenzerr

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OK one more for CC. I was wondering about exposure and composition. I really was not trying to tell a story when i took it. It was really just a snapshot but i thought it was nice when looking at it.

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I like it...seems like abstract art :p I don't like the overly unfocused bottom right of the screen though...seems like a smudge. Hell, maybe it's because I have no clue what I am looking at, but it seems like those (poles? stalks?) go from slightly focused to "blow-your-mind" OOF. I THINK its the background that's actually out of focus, but its hard to distinguish with this as the B&W melds those greys together.
 
Great photo but yeah I agree with the above poster the bottom right looks a bit odd and distracting so maybe a slightly higher F stop would have helped? Great B&W though!
 
Actually i agree also. Looking at it now it is a bit annoying. I sure like cs5 though for producing black and whites
 

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