C & C please

qwerty1402

TPF Noob!
Joined
Jan 30, 2012
Messages
8
Reaction score
0
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Thanks everyone :)
 
Last edited:

jowensphoto

Been spending a lot of time on here!
Joined
Feb 28, 2011
Messages
2,981
Reaction score
899
Location
Northern Viriginia, US
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
The focus seems to be off or at least very soft in all of them? What aperture are you shooting at?

Out of the set, I think the one of the cups is most interesting.

Edited to add: I saw the comment about "chopping" the edges of the placemat/doily. The cutting off doesn't bother me so much (since it's pretty symmetrical), but I did notice upon a second glance that there's a little crease in the bottom left. Just a tiny bit of a distraction.
 
Last edited:

sanderso

TPF Noob!
Joined
Dec 3, 2010
Messages
158
Reaction score
6
Location
Chicago
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Seems like #1 needs more contrast. I like the idea.

#3 is interesting but needs a smaller "place-mat" to avoid getting chopped on the edges.

Sorry, #2 and #4 don't work for me.

My $0.02.
 

bazooka

No longer a newbie, moving up!
Joined
Dec 28, 2009
Messages
2,293
Reaction score
294
Location
Houston
Website
www.dirtjournal.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
With only 5 posts, I'm not going to put in the time to C&C unless you first put in some time to tell us something about your shots at the least, or you can do your own C&C (preferred) and then we can comment on that. For all I know you'll never look at this post again and I'll be wasting my time. "Help me help you."
 

paigew

Been spending a lot of time on here!
Joined
Nov 15, 2011
Messages
3,854
Reaction score
1,792
Location
Texas (Hill Country)
Website
www.paigewilks.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
I think 1 is the best. Next time I would shoot in portrait mode (vertical). Also if she was looking at the bubble it may be better. Along with making it a bit sharper/more focused.
 

Most reactions

Top