C&C : SELF-PORTRAIT with my new CANON 24-105mm !

[SCPhotography]

Hi guys! I'd like to know what you think of this self-portrait I did with my new Canon 24-105mm that just arrived. I'm still experimenting photography and I tried to give a more dramatic look to this photo. Let me know what you think

1/125, f/10, ISO200, 85mm, on camera flash

 

[Zzang]

Looks great... Almost CG like. Haha.

 

[Majeed Badizadegan]

What expression are you going for here?

I think with the expression you have, it would fit better if you were looking directly at the camera.

 

[SCPhotography]

Anger. And you're right if I was looking in the camera it would be more intense.

 

[Robin Usagani]

it needs rim light

 

[SCPhotography]

Right! Excuse my ghetto setup haha.

 

[Mo.]

I like it, maybe seeing a bit more of your hair would be nice.

 

[SCPhotography]

That's what I thought! I'll try to do a second version of it.

 

[SCPhotography]

Any other comment?

 

[cgipson1]

I don't get anger! I get more bored "whatever"!

 

[IByte]

Looks like roid rage to me oO.

 

[SCPhotography]

Lol roid rage is a bit exagerated

 

[SoulfulRecover]

"Yo Adrian!"

I like it but would like to see more of the hair showing up. doesnt have to be much but a bit more would be nice.

 

[IByte]

Lol roid rage is a bit exagerated

Lol no that look is the calm before storm, you are getting yourself ready and focused. Which what I will be tomorrow after photo class.

 

[Trace63]

Those eyes arent sitting right with me, did you whiten in post?