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kirbym2

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Did a shoot last night... playing around with some different settings/techniques. A first for me on the "out of focus, but artsy" shots. Curious as to others thoughts. Thought they turned out okay. I've been having some challenges in editing with RAW, WB in particular, so would love any thoughts on this too.

Thanks all!

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If you like them, that's what's important, but to be honest, neither of the OOF images do a thing for me. I don't see anything artsy in either of them. What was your thought/intent with these two?

#3, while less than exciting ast least has a discernable subject. The colours look acceptable, but it is slightly under-exposed.

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John
 
Appreciate the honesty. I've seen a few OOF shots before, and liked the feeling they invoked (in this case based on the warmth of the colour in the image). I thought the third looked a little underexposed as well, thanks for reaffirming ;)

Thanks again!
 
At the risk of sounding defensive, I suppose it's fair to say that one's definition of "artistic" is VERY subjective. I asked for C&C, and I would never in a million years expect everyone to have a positive/favourable response. I guess each person has an idea of what they want out of C&C - I should have specified that I'm the type of guy who's looking for criticism, but also for ways to improve upon my work. I've posted in beginner... I am a beginner... I'm eager to learn. If you simply don't like the work, I'm okay with that... was just hoping for something a little more quantifiable.

Sorry for the mini-rant ;)
 
Focus your images and they will look better IMO. They make my eyes feel as if they are straining when looking at them.
 
Hi Man from Van...cool your Jets a bit...oops, they're from Winnipeg aren't they ;)...I must say that I tend to agree with what has been said so far, just because you take an OOF image and called it art does not make it so. If you are interested in this sort of thing, then you may want to Google subjects like "selective focus" (something like your third image), the "Orton Effect", and zoom-blurring...

A guide to the selective focus technique

The Easy Guide To Creating The Orton Effect | Peter Hill’s Weblog

and as I indicated, there is also a technique that can be done with a zoom lens, called strangely enough, as indicated - "zoom-blurring"...

Creating zoom blur in your images and...

Mastering the Zoom Effect


Hopefully, this will give you some alternatives to simply shooting OOF images.

Regards,

WesternGuy
 
Artistic is VERY subjective indeed. The out of focus shots has nothing "striking" (colors, composition, and/or primary subject) to keep my attention. I scrolled down pretty quick to avoid hurting my eyes. The 3rd one is under exposed IMHO.
 
Not to pile on here, but when I see/hear someone using "artistic" to describe one of their own photos, I cannot help but flinch, even without looking at the photo. Maybe its just pavlovian conditioning, but almost every thread where someone posted their "artistic" shots went down in flames. That's not to say that artistic shots are not possible, but it's up to the viewing audience to decide whether the shot is artistic.

The first image has a bright spot (the sun I presume) surrounded by some dark shapes. For this to work, we should be able to recognize what the shapes are, and what the relation is between the bright spot and the surrounding shapes. Usually, well-executed OOF shots use color contrast or some other visual attribute to draw attention to an element of the image, and the out-of-focus area serves to frame the area of interest. Really good OOF images make you stop and tease out the hints in the image.

The second image is clearly of a field, but out of focus. Nothing particularly noteworthy or attention-grabbing there. If you think of a picture as a short story, what kind of narrative does this image convey?

Third image is identifiable, but here the question is, what do you want us to see? The focus is on some green berries at the lower center. However, the depth-of-field is sufficient for us to see the foliage around, which is sharp enough to compete for attention with the berries.

For images to be interesting to viewers, there has to be something there to make us care and take the time to look. You have only a few seconds to make a good impression, and if you don’t capture the viewers attention early, they will move on.
 
I would have something in focus on work on dof my eyes strain to find some area of the photo to focus on. I am new as well so I don't know much about achieving dof
 
It feels like someone stole my glasses (even though I don't wear any)
 
Thanks to all for taking the time to comment. I'm thinking OOF is not the way to go for me ;)
I have attempted a couple of shots using zoom-blurring. Turned out so-so for me. I guess with everything, practice is the key.
@Kbarredo - that was the first thing I thought when looking at the images... lol.
 
If you are looking for inspiration in the OOF area, google "Freeman Patterson". He gives many workshops, and he has a number of books that explore imaging. Here is a link to one of his books, on which he uses OOF very effectively: Freeman Patterson : Photography and the Art of Seeing
 
Like what some others say, if it means something to you, than that's great. It's your art, but to someone on the outside, I'm sorry to say that it doesn't send me anything. It doesn't give me a message or even tell me what you are trying to say. The first two just kind of look like "accident" shots.
 

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