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tevo

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I have been out doing more street photography (on film, which I have yet to develop because the nearest lab that does more than C-41 is 45 minutes away :grumpy:), and I caught this today while I was at the park.. something about the woman's face and the scene struck me. I should have left my shutter go a little longer to give more motion blur, but my camera was already set and I just shot. C&C is appreciated.

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Woman on Bicycle by theofficialtevo, on Flickr
 
She has a "damn kids" look in her eyes LOL. Not a bad looking photo though tevo, just kind of blandish, IMO
 
She has a "damn kids" look in her eyes LOL. Not a bad looking photo though tevo, just kind of blandish, IMO

I can see that, however what I was initially struck by was almost a confrontational xenophobic look... her look made ME feel out of place rather than her.
 
Really nice, I do like that slight motion blur look without the subject getting any soft, I love that angry but kinda gentle look in her eyes. Black and white makes the photo more appealing.
 
She has a "damn kids" look in her eyes LOL. Not a bad looking photo though tevo, just kind of blandish, IMO

I can see that, however what I was initially struck by was almost a confrontational xenophobic look... her look made ME feel out of place rather than her.
I definitely understand that feeling. Is it weird that I enjoy getting looks like that?
 
She has a "damn kids" look in her eyes LOL. Not a bad looking photo though tevo, just kind of blandish, IMO

I can see that, however what I was initially struck by was almost a confrontational xenophobic look... her look made ME feel out of place rather than her.
I definitely understand that feeling. Is it weird that I enjoy getting looks like that?

Not at all! Then again, that greatly depends on who is giving you the look..
 
She trying to figure if she could get away with running you over. ;)
I'm not sure the vignette helps this image. I'm guessing the sky in the upper left was too bright.
A different crop might be a better solution.
 
She trying to figure if she could get away with running you over. ;)
I'm not sure the vignette helps this image. I'm guessing the sky in the upper left was too bright.
A different crop might be a better solution.

I used a split ND filter for the sky, and a subtle vignette.. I felt that it would center in on the subject a bit. Thanks for the critique!
 
tevo said:
I have been out doing more street photography (on film, which I have yet to develop because the nearest lab that does more than C-41 is 45 minutes away :grumpy:), and I caught this today while I was at the park.. something about the woman's face and the scene struck me. I should have left my shutter go a little longer to give more motion blur, but my camera was already set and I just shot. C&C is appreciated.

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http://www.flickr.com/photos/theofficialtevo/8331631741/
Woman on Bicycle by theofficialtevo, on Flickr

I like this,, good effort
 

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