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Candice in jeans

I'd have perhaps caused drama by cutting a little hair and/or hand and left more of that butt in the pic. The butt isn't sharp so it wouldn't be a total distraction either
 
Only one thing bothering me. She only has a catch-light on her left eye. This makers her left eye seem bigger to me. Any other nitpicking is just that, nitpicking. I'm also not too sure about her arms being crossed but it is what it is.

Beautiful model.
 
I hope most of you guys are paid pro making some serious coin with these c/c. I'm pretty sure that photo and the OPs other work would please just about any client.
 
LShooter said:
I hope most of you guys are paid pro making some serious coin with these c/c. I'm pretty sure that photo and the OPs other work would please just about any client.

No I am not a pro. He asked for what we thought. Our ideas may give him insight for the next shoot. We know he creates Damn god work. But aren't we all striving to do better?
 
I hope most of you guys are paid pro making some serious coin with these c/c. I'm pretty sure that photo and the OPs other work would please just about any client.

What's a mystery is why he's on here posting stuff for C&C if he's a successful commercial guy. Maybe he's between gigs and wants to poke the animals or something.

The kid on the bike was excellent, this one's a bit of a mess though. Being a pro means just that you show up on time and can manage to generate an invoice.
 
Those huge man-hands kinda-ruin it for me...she's a lovely woman, with a very nice pair of jeans, from what I can see. This shot seems like it's almost all there, but not quite. Really attractive 20-something, hawt model types are all over the interwebz these days...it's hard to tell what this shot is supposed to be "selling"...anyway, thanks for the titillation!

Your photo livened up TPF a little bit today! And the photo ALMOST qualified for my line: "I find this photo totally sexist and degrading. Please post more like it, ASAP!"
 
I like it. I believe that you got the pose, the frame, the focus, the background, and the light all spot on. The issues mentioned with OOF, "out of proportion hands", crossed arms are not issues with me.
 
It's a gorgeous shot, by all means.
I don't know why, but the hand closest to us seems really large and masculine. That was the biggest draw for me.
I am really OK with the half of a butt part. The OOF butt drew my eye too, but not as bad as the hand.
 
I hope most of you guys are paid pro making some serious coin with these c/c. I'm pretty sure that photo and the OPs other work would please just about any client.

I think it would depend on who the client is. I seriously doubt if it is the model herself, and there might not even be an actual client if this was simply a portfolio shot.
 
Graham.M said:
Not sure why any of those things would bother you, but each to their own.

Because due to the composition, my eyes are drawn to her butt right after the sky, and it's blurry. No good.

Other than that, and the blown sky, this is a nice shot.
 
LShooter said:
I hope most of you guys are paid pro making some serious coin with these c/c. I'm pretty sure that photo and the OPs other work would please just about any client.

No doubt any client would be happy with these. But most clients are dumb.

I'd never ask even a happy client for C/C.
 

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