candid "at the park" portraits

[cgipson1]

Here is one I shot yesterday... C&C Welcome....

 

[D-B-J]

Too tight of a crop for me.

 

[cgipson1]

Better?

 

[D-B-J]

The last two have focus issues, and the first of the three, she has hair over her face, which is highly distracting. Also, the images seem to have a yellow hue to them, and the WB is off as a result.

 

[cgipson1]

these are candids... shot on a windy day at the park. Not posed.. not formal in any sense. I think that allows for the hair.. especially since that is a "normal" thing for this little girl. Yes.. They are a little soft! I will take a look at the color issues. A lot of the ambient light was reflected off of the yellow wood chips that the park is layered with.. might be coming from there. I was using off camera fill flash, but not enough to override all of the ambient. I don't really see the yellow you are talking about on my monitor... but then I have never calibrated this monitor either. I do appreciate the critique.... and look forward to hearing from others....