Car in Action in the City

[Samerr9]

What do u think?

 

[RockstarPhotography]

personally I think there are too many shadows and the car is too blurry.

cool angle though

 

[Davor]

i like it personally even though its blurry. you should crank your ISO next time and bring your shutter speed up to kill the blur

 

[lyonsroar]

50mm
f5
1/15

It almost looks like your ISO is already cranked up from the grain on the car itself? I might have gone for a larger aperture to allow for a higher shutter speed myself. I agree though, cool angle :thumbup:

 

[KmH]

I think the photo has a good sense of motion and intesting light.

If it is a crop of a larger photo I would experiment with the composition by having the car a bit higher in the frame and add a bit of dodging to the wheels and tires.

 

[inaka]

It's a sweet shot, but it looks like a car on a track and not in the city.
Just sayin...

 

[GooniesNeverSayDie11]

Was the blur done in post? Why is there a ghosted car in front as well as back? Was it driving in reverse and then slamming it in forward super fast?

 

[Samerr9]

Thank for the comments guys..

@ RockstarPhotography it is blury because it was shot at 1/15 i was using the kit lens so couldn't go with larger apture, on the other hand regarding the shadows i increased the contract in post editing, i think it made it dramatic.. other setting are like dull..

@ Davor & lyonsroar i took that at ISO 3200 and applied some sharpening in post edit so that is why the grains are more harsh

@ KmH & GooniesNeverSayDie11 i did apply extra motion blur to the image and i kept those car ghost on purpose, i thought it will increase the sense of motion as KmH said (do u think it is bad?).. I will try the new crop and the dodging for the wheels and repost soon..

@ inaka i promise i it is in the city from and from my home window

Thank you again for the comments and tips..

 

[GooniesNeverSayDie11]

I think the ghosting in front of the car looks bad. It looks unnatural. The motion should tell your brain which way the car is traveling and give a sense of speed. With both ends ghosted, it just makes me feel like I drank one too many.