Yeah, the second shot has intriguing location, subject, and LIGHT. I like the light that was there! I am really diggin' that reflection of her puffy skirt on the floor.
The first shot, the darkish eyes and the very hot highlight on the nose....make me not like it much. I just have an aversion to that yellow skin that results with so many digital cameras when skin is over-exposed....it's not the loss of detail that bugs me, but rather the strong yellow tone...is just clashes with her makeup, and really strikes discordant notes within me. I'm not sure if it's because I learned on film, or what.