Celestial Coal...

[Frequency]

A pastel work by Mother Nature



C&C please

Regards

 

[Frequency]

i would be happy with one or two comments

 

[KyraLamb]

That lady- so talented.

 

[Josh220]

I am wondering if a tighter crop would help it? I also wish there was more foreground.

The colors are wonderful though!

 

[Geaux]

Hmm, doesn't do too much for me. Maybe a different crop or different composition, but there is something else about it though that I can't put my finger on. Maybe its the softness of the shot and lack of sharpness that gets me or the foreground is boring. I'm not sure, but I know it doesn't appeal to my senses.

 

[Bossy]

Theres something wonky with the editing, theres odd flare around the treeline and it looks like you tried to pull up shadows.

 

[Frequency]

That lady- so talented.

True...agreed

Thank you

 

[Frequency]

I am wondering if a tighter crop would help it? I also wish there was more foreground.

The colors are wonderful though!

Thank you Josh

 

[Frequency]

Hmm, doesn't do too much for me. Maybe a different crop or different composition, but there is something else about it though that I can't put my finger on. Maybe its the softness of the shot and lack of sharpness that gets me or the foreground is boring. I'm not sure, but I know it doesn't appeal to my senses.

No problems... better luck for me, next time

Regards for expressing your concerns in detail

 

[Frequency]

Theres something wonky with the editing, theres odd flare around the treeline and it looks like you tried to pull up shadows.

Thank you Bossy.... i was adjusting the brightness when i found that sun looks like a burning piece of coal which fierce-fully expels flames... that is why i liked it ...and it has a pastel artistic look too... so i thought of sharing this with all

The same attempt developed those lines around the tree

Regards