College campus

[ZacKrohn]

Over the summer I worked a day camp which was located at our local college (sonoma state) during one of my lunch breaks I took a roll of film. I would realy like to hear feedback from you

-Zac

 

[terri34 6]

Hi Zac: I think the first two would work better as verticals. I like your repeating lines in the second image but there is too much distraction on either side, if that makes sense.

I definitely like the third image - very crisp. I like the texture of the metal and the wall - nicely done! But - it's killing me that the faucet is cut off. I want to see all of it, even with a little drip of water right at the tip!

 

[molested_cow]

I just think there is a lot more potential in terms of the composition. You can try to explore more angles. Maybe not so much through a human's eye. Perhaps put some imagination and think of what how a fly or a bird will see it.... hope you know what I mean.

I wish I have a wacom tablet to sketch out what I am suggesting....

 

[ZacKrohn]

thanks for the input guys. terri I was also very sad about the cut off faucet. Oh well maybe some day soon I'll go back.

-Zac
PS year long school class starts tomorrow and I'll get to learn developing!