Comments and Critiques :)

[immafreebeetch]

First I'm pretty happy with all the shots but still I'm looking for some ideas to make these photos look better
A friend is asking me to shoot her so every critiques, comments, ideas and suggestions are all welcome and very much appreciated.
thanks in advance.
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_DSC0111 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0109 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0100 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0092 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0090 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0089 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr

 

[RebeccaAPhotography]

How many threads do you need for these pictures. Lol.

 

[MReid]

Think of the background as your frame and then place your subject into the frame. Find better frames.
Levels adjustment to make these pop, a little more creative framing, these are just a hair tight in some of them.
Cute model. Shots are decent.

 

[LuckySe7en]

They look nice and sharp but that warehouse in the background kills your photos. Try and pay attention to the background. Also the knee is #3 looks weird. My eye was drawn immediately to her knee instead of her face.

 

[CMfromIL]

Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.

 

[immafreebeetch]

How many threads do you need for these pictures. Lol.

Lol the other one are different photos I knew it. Some would think they're same set of photos lol

 

[immafreebeetch]

Think of the background as your frame and then place your subject into the frame. Find better frames.
Levels adjustment to make these pop, a little more creative framing, these are just a hair tight in some of them.
Cute model. Shots are decent.

Thanks bruv! I think I still have a long way to run to make a really good photos. I will take your advice and bear it mind

 

[immafreebeetch]

They look nice and sharp but that warehouse in the background kills your photos. Try and pay attention to the background. Also the knee is #3 looks weird. My eye was drawn immediately to her knee instead of her face.

Yeah sometimes I tend to lose My attention to the background an just focus on the subject. Thanks man!

PS: photo #3 wasn't really supposed to be part of the set but I really love her smile in that one hehe. Thanks again

 

[immafreebeetch]

Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.

LoL! It really is a leash haha...

 

[bazooka]

I feel like the eyes are unnaturally white and the skin unnaturally smooth.

 

[immafreebeetch]

I feel like the eyes are unnaturally white and the skin unnaturally smooth.

Can you give me advice to make them look more natural?

 

[RebeccaAPhotography]

Lol the other one are different photos I knew it. Some would think they're same set of photos lol

Hahaha too funny! Im surprised I'm the only one who sai something.

 

[gsgary]

First and last are best, shame about the background in the first but nice pose, is she a he ?

 

[Derrel]

Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.

Neckware covers up something...

 

[gsgary]

Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.

Neckware covers up something...

Just what i was thinking