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First I'm pretty happy with all the shots but still I'm looking for some ideas to make these photos look better :)
A friend is asking me to shoot her so every critiques, comments, ideas and suggestions are all welcome and very much appreciated. :)
thanks in advance.
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_DSC0111 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0109 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0100 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0092 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0090 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
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_DSC0089 by immafreebeetch, on Flickr
 
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Think of the background as your frame and then place your subject into the frame. Find better frames.
Levels adjustment to make these pop, a little more creative framing, these are just a hair tight in some of them.
Cute model. Shots are decent.
 

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They look nice and sharp but that warehouse in the background kills your photos. Try and pay attention to the background. Also the knee is #3 looks weird. My eye was drawn immediately to her knee instead of her face.
 

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Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.
 
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RebeccaAPhotography said:
How many threads do you need for these pictures. Lol.

Lol the other one are different photos :p I knew it. Some would think they're same set of photos lol
 
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MReid said:
Think of the background as your frame and then place your subject into the frame. Find better frames.
Levels adjustment to make these pop, a little more creative framing, these are just a hair tight in some of them.
Cute model. Shots are decent.

Thanks bruv! I think I still have a long way to run to make a really good photos. I will take your advice and bear it mind :)
 
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LuckySe7en said:
They look nice and sharp but that warehouse in the background kills your photos. Try and pay attention to the background. Also the knee is #3 looks weird. My eye was drawn immediately to her knee instead of her face.

Yeah sometimes I tend to lose My attention to the background an just focus on the subject. Thanks man!

PS: photo #3 wasn't really supposed to be part of the set but I really love her smile in that one hehe. Thanks again :)
 
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CMfromIL said:
Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.

LoL! It really is a leash haha...
 

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I feel like the eyes are unnaturally white and the skin unnaturally smooth.
 
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bazooka said:
I feel like the eyes are unnaturally white and the skin unnaturally smooth.

Can you give me advice to make them look more natural? :)
 
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immafreebeetch said:
Lol the other one are different photos :p I knew it. Some would think they're same set of photos lol

Hahaha too funny! Im surprised I'm the only one who sai something.
 

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