Comments and Critiques :)

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  1. immafreebeetch

    immafreebeetch TPF Noob!

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    First I'm pretty happy with all the shots but still I'm looking for some ideas to make these photos look better :)
    A friend is asking me to shoot her so every critiques, comments, ideas and suggestions are all welcome and very much appreciated. :)
    thanks in advance.
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  2. RebeccaAPhotography

    RebeccaAPhotography TPF Noob!

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    How many threads do you need for these pictures. Lol.
     
  3. MReid

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    Think of the background as your frame and then place your subject into the frame. Find better frames.
    Levels adjustment to make these pop, a little more creative framing, these are just a hair tight in some of them.
    Cute model. Shots are decent.
     
  4. LuckySe7en

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    They look nice and sharp but that warehouse in the background kills your photos. Try and pay attention to the background. Also the knee is #3 looks weird. My eye was drawn immediately to her knee instead of her face.
     
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    Pretty model. Unfortnate use of neckware. Looks like she's on a leash.:er: #1 is the best of the bunch. #3 is blown out.
     
  6. immafreebeetch

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    Lol the other one are different photos :p I knew it. Some would think they're same set of photos lol
     
  7. immafreebeetch

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    Thanks bruv! I think I still have a long way to run to make a really good photos. I will take your advice and bear it mind :)
     
  8. immafreebeetch

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    Yeah sometimes I tend to lose My attention to the background an just focus on the subject. Thanks man!

    PS: photo #3 wasn't really supposed to be part of the set but I really love her smile in that one hehe. Thanks again :)
     
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    LoL! It really is a leash haha...
     
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    I feel like the eyes are unnaturally white and the skin unnaturally smooth.
     
  11. immafreebeetch

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    Can you give me advice to make them look more natural? :)
     
  12. RebeccaAPhotography

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    Hahaha too funny! Im surprised I'm the only one who sai something.
     

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