Comments requested

[ceemac]

I need more honest comments. I'd like to think I'm learning something, but it might be a slow process. Mostly interested in focus and composition comments.
Thanks

 

[Jeff15]

Your image looks fine to me....

 

[ceemac]

Thank you, Gerard for your comments and hard work. I did order reflectors yesterday. Hopefully she's the voice activated part. She was a difficult model to work with in her own special way. The hat was borrowed as her ball cap was dirty and the camera height "makes her wrinkles less pronounced". But I will try different distances Thanks.

 

[ceemac]

Your image looks fine to me....

Haha. You always say that. You need to remember you're thousands of miles away and the picture is harder to see.

 

[chuasam]

would have shot from a lower angle.
worked on the wardrobe. the hat kinda doesn't go with the hoodie and jacket.
the smile feels a bit strained like she's been holding it too long.