Convergence

[minicoop1985]

Alright guys, how did I do? What can I do better? Well, besides the noise issue on the bottom.


Convergence by longm1985, on Flickr

 

[timor]

Very nice, however a bit overwhelming with so many lines in every direction. For me the sea blue glass makes the picture and the lightness of the rest.

 

[hamlet]

All i see is a bleak authoritarian, Orwellian, Gattaca movie type of surrounding. "Abandon all hope all ye who enter" type of situation.

 

[Mike Lamb]

More contrast. Good lines. It looks too illustrated/shopped for me.

 

[ristretto]

I like it, looks good. Sometimes these tightly framed architectural pictures create a disorientating 'pin cushion' like illusion that doesn't sit well within a rectangle and pulls at the corners, but this looks nice and works well. I'd spot out a few of the stains on the facing wall and leading edge of the sloping roof, and maybe the t-shaped reflections in the windows at the foot of the picture.