cooking!!

[milesy]

my little one doing a little cooking........C&C welcome

 

[pbelarge]

She is cute.
So cute, that I would like to see more of her face. Maybe lighten up the exposure some too. The look is precious.

 

[milesy]

thanks for the feedback.....

 

[milesy]

ok lightened it up a bit............do you think its better???

 

[Olympus E300]

Very nice crispness in her eyes. I dislike the fact that she is hiding part of her face but kids will be kids... Lots of pink in this composition which I think works well for her. I do think that you blew out her right shoulder just a touch with your PP. Overall, I like it. Well done! By the way, I am new to this stuff as well, so please, please, please, take my feedback with a grain of salt and realize that I to am learning. Sometimes I comment on other's photo's just to see if the pros agree with me. Its part of my learning technique.

Cheers!
- Dan

 

[brettmc]

Agree with the above; would have liked to see more of her face. Great focus on the eyes and a very cute little girl. I like the lightened version much better, keep up the good work!

 

[lucypaddydog]

Lovely, just lovely, innocence with a touch of butter would not melt in mouth... I too like the lightened version better.