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Couple of car shots

timputtick

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These were shot raw and been through a fair amount of re-touching, what do you think?
If the photo's don't work bare with me and i'll sort it,
Thanks.



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I really like the images, especially the second one for its colors, composition and for some other unspecified reasons :D
 
HDR'ish?

They look beautiful!

The first one really does it for me though, the tone of the blue on the car is just right, subtle but with impact. Just right. Love the brooding sky directly over the car. The point in focus looks to be the center of the car, as the wheel and lights are slightly out of focus... it's just a point of personal taste, but I would have liked the depth of field a bit wider to get all the car in focus.

The second shot has only one problem for me, but again it is pretty subjective: The grass needs to go up a shade to match the shade of the car and sky. If you look just to the left of the front wheel, part of the grass is slightly raised in the tone of its color. That's the tone the rest of the grass should be for me. Still, like I said, it's a subjective point of view on my part.

But great job though, really nice.
 
I really like the first one, second one is a bit of a miss for me. car looks a bit soft and just the angle, pointed down and away just doesn't do it for me personally.
 
I like the processing on number 1, but the composition is a miss in my opinion.
Half a car, empty beach on the left, open hood pointing out of the frame ...

The second one misses with me for both composition and processing. The car is facing away from me and into a ditch. I would rather see a car shot from behind that leads my eye to where the car is headed - and have it more interesting than a ditch. The coloring fails for me too here, but might have been better with better composition.
 

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