Couple of Shot for C&C Please

[Fleetwood271]

Like 'em? Don't like 'em?

Composition?

Focus?

Suggestions for PP?

I'd appreciate all comments on both shots.

Thanks!

 

[jackiejay]

like em 2nd ones my fav neat shots

 

[JbleezyJ]

I think number 1 would have looked really awesome with a really really narrow aperture.