shaunly
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- Mar 20, 2009
- Messages
- 575
- Reaction score
- 6
- Location
- Orange County, CA
- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos NOT OK to edit
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#1 looks uncomfortable. The pose and the image are not working for me. Correct the WB and add a little more contrast (just a touch).
#2 I love the background but she is blown out in spots (tip of nose, parts of hair, and forehead). You have her dead center in the shot... Try moving her right or left andturning her a bit to put her in a more feminine pose.
love the bokeh in #2!!!
Number two has some errors, but it is still a show stopper. The pic rules, better than alot I see on here. Just work on those small things and it would be better, but regardless if you changed it or not, the picture is really good.
There are alot of good pictures that are posted on here that do not get the praise they deserve because alot of these people on this forum think there the hottest **** to hit photography. So do not get discouraged. Keep up the good work.
what lens were you using to get that bokeh
What if you cropped #1 a bit to make her stand out a bit more... Just a thought.. Something like...