Critique a ROOKIE.

[wtfranky22]

Hey forum,
I took some shots today, so please tell me what you think. I just received my Canon T3i on X-mas and I am completely new to this. I am simply getting to know how my camera works. This is my first time ever posting my pictures for others to critique or even seen in general ahah. I am welcome to constructive criticism and any future tips from you all! I look forward to growing with all your knowledge. :hail:











Thanks for looking,
Take care.

 

[ronlane]

The white balance looks off on all of them except the last one. Of the group, I like #4 the best. As far as suggestions, read your manual and keep getting to know your camera and keep practicing.

 

[pic_chick]

1.not bad I would crop out the dark on the right and up the exposure a bit maybe toy with the WB
2.WB is off a good bit also you do not have the dog in focus i don't know if it is motion blur but I call do over on this one.
3.I bit to warm it is the WB again but over all not bad
4. your best one I think of this lot but it is a little soft I would try this again just to see if you can get the 1st ball sharper
5. you need a faster shutter speed or a slower one looks like a snap shot with more blur it could be neat and look like you wanted blur or you need to stop the blurr altogether a flash would help here.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Get the book "The Photographers Eye" or "Learning to See Creatively", and learn about composition.

 

[pic_chick]

trust the bitter jeweler he does know his stuff!!

 

[wtfranky22]

The white balance looks off on all of them except the last one.

@Ronlane ohhh I know ahaha I actually have a white balance lens cap in the mail! thank you for your great input!

 

[wtfranky22]

@Pic_chick WOW! thank you so much! this is exactly the type of advice I was looking for. I will use this!

 

[wtfranky22]

Get the book "The Photographers Eye" or "Learning to See Creatively", and learn about composition.

Downloading them on my Kindle Fire! Your my type of man cut dry and straight to the point thank you!

 

[amolitor]

The dog and the bus are not bad. There's some seeing going on there. Technical problems here and there. I wouldn't say that they're keepers, but technical problems go away eventually. Those two suggest to me that you have some ideas about putting things into the frame.