Critique needed - Photos of a studio

[Illah]

These are meant to showcase a video studio, I could use some critique on these shots please.

Thanks,

--Illah

#1 - Uncropped, minimally touched for reference

#1 - Cropped, cleaned up a bit

#2

#3

 

[C.Lloyd]

#2 would be better if the actual model wasn't quite so far out of focus. Actually, all of them would. And is the picture in the monitor not actually what was there originally? It looks like the actual model isn't smiling, but the one in the monitor is smiling (in #1).

 

[C.Lloyd]

And the picture in the monitor and the picture in the flip out display of the camera are the same photo. Not a big deal if you're trying to pick the best, but if you're doing these in a series... not so good.

 

[Illah]

Yeah, the monitor is faked, it's impossible to expose properly for the monitor and the scene at the same time. It'll be cleaned up and more matched to the pose in the final run.

--Illah