Cubism Attempt. Need replies quick please!

[shawnxstl]

I wanted some opinions asap please! thanks!

 

[WimFoto]

i can see an edit like this as an illustration for an article about multiple personalities or something. perhaps in color it looks more interesting ?

 

[shawnxstl]

I felt that the color version was too distracting due to the rapid changes in color shifting in the various pictures. Thanks for the reply!

 

[Hope]

I would chop the pic up to the neck ..you don't need the whole body, just the face makes for a more interesting comp.

 

[C.Lloyd]

The body is complete, but the face is in pieces.... doesn't work for me. I can tell what his shirt looks like, but wouldn't recognize him if I saw him.

 

[kennyshafard]

I actually like this. Very creative and new. For me at least.

 

[C.Lloyd]

I know what's bugging me about it.... there's no left eye in any of the cubes. His right eye is in 2 of them, but no left... I see that it may be in the one cube at the top right, but the eye is covered by either shadow or his hat.