Cupcakes C&C please :)

[telly]

Took these a while back for my friend's bakery website. She used the second one.
Let me know what you think. I know they could have better focus; I'm still quite the noob at this photography thing
Also, I now realize I should have got the reflection better.

 

[durhamskywriter]

i actually like the first photo better. it's neat and uncluttered—plus the reflection is a real bonus. the second photo looks kinda busy to me.

 

[telly]

Yeah, I hadn't photographed food before and wasn't sure how to set anything up. I wanted to play around with the sprinkles in the jars but didn't want to make a mess.

 

[Kazooie]

Actually I see a muffin and what looks like a mini cheesecake too.

 

[joel28]

Telly, nice images!

 

[Jaemie]

I'm surprised at the lack of sharpness throughout the set. I think the DOF was too shallow in some images, but at least one was shot at f/8 so I'm not sure what caused the OOF issue in that photo. At the very least, the bakery's name in #2 should be sharp and clear.

Otherwise, I like the colours and compositions. Nice.

 

[eric1971]

To me, the first one is ruined by showing the front edge of the counter. My eye is immediately drawn to that.

 

[Frequency]

I like the last very much...parents and their children