Curves & Corners

[Ysarex93 87]

Crazy busy getting ready for classes to start Monday, but I did get out for a walk to the grocery store today and went the long way around an old industrial area where this caught my eye.

Joe

 

[swashburn421]

I really like this shot, like really really. Its awesome the see the new plate broken and see those great old pane windows behind them!

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Love it.
I would, however, get rid of the brick on the edge, and the stone on the bottom.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Joe

 

[o hey tyler]

Reminds me of scenery in Portal 2. Nicely captured!

 

[Derrel]

Nifty find Ysarex. I'm not convinced that eliminating the brickwork and the original window jamb helps...I think the "L" created by those elements helps.

 

[swashburn421]

I agree. The brick gives the picture character and context. Without it and the border, it feels too open. Stick to the original, its right out amazing

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

Yeah, after posting it, I have to admit, I changed my mind. :thumbup:

 

[tirediron]

GREAT shot!

 

[Ysarex93 87]

I'm flattered and thank you all.

Bitter, I sat at the computer for ten minutes Ctrl Z, back and forth on that crop. I'm not at all convinced that your first instinct isn't the better alternative; those bricks bug me. They bugged me when I took the photo and I tried to crop them off in the camera. They're still buggin' me. Thanks.

Joe

 

[KenC]

Nice work!

If anything I'd be more inclined to crop the top and right side - feels like there's a bit too much of the solid light gray area.

 

[MiFleur]

Yep! I like it too, rich geometric patterns and texture, a great capture!