Dance

[Daniellegiacovani]

Opinions?

 

[Nettles]

In my opinion it's got promise but maybe it needs thought through again. There's a lot of dark space at the bottom and far detail looks like it's starting to blow. A muted burst of flash would possibly help?

Initially my eye was drawn to where her foot overlaps the tree. Separation there would help too.

It might not be possible to go back, but if it is try different ideas and compositions. It's an interesting context for sure. At this resolution the image looks a little soft overall. What camera/phone were you using here?

 

[LilyBee]

Potential indeed, I am looking at it wondering if its too much with the girl and the nature in front of it, my eyes keep going back and forth not knowing where to rest. I wonder how the pic would look taken from the other side, her front at this time, then she can still turn her back ad you tha cave thing and her? Maybe the simpisity of that would work better Obvioudly as I havent been there I do not know this its a wondering.

 

[funwitha7d]

funky venue, interesting shot

 

[weepete]

It's a good idea but I'd echo the comments above. My eye is drawn too much to the white tree trunk and its reflection. I think that the bacground is too light and the foreground too dark meaning that my attention is drawn away from the subject to the background.

Looks like a promising location though.

 

[Benjo255]

Too much foreground for me. But I really like the idea.