Discussion in 'People Photography' started by shuttervelocity, Mar 9, 2012.
First submission. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!
Suchi-dandellion by ksreera, on Flickr
While I like the concept I don't feel it was executed well. The girl is very under under-exposed, the crop is uncomfrotable with too much of her head chopped. A "potrait" orientation and some reflected light would have given this a drweamy summer day feel. Just my opinion
Thanks for your inputs. I just just a couple of seconds before she would have blown the dandellion to a bare stick and I was pleading with her to hold still. I'll try it again with better light on her face. Thanks again!
Unfortunately the underexposure of your secondary subject, along with the shallow DoF, makes her look as if she has a Jimmy Durante "Schnozzola" under those raccoon eyes. A scrim camera left and a reflector camera right would have been to your benefit. Nice concept.
Thanks for sharing.
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