Dandelion girl C&C welcome

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by shuttervelocity, Mar 9, 2012.

  1. shuttervelocity

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    First submission. Please let me know what you think. Thanks! :D

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    Suchi-dandellion by ksreera, on Flickr


     
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    While I like the concept I don't feel it was executed well. The girl is very under under-exposed, the crop is uncomfrotable with too much of her head chopped. A "potrait" orientation and some reflected light would have given this a drweamy summer day feel. Just my opinion ;)
     
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    Thanks for your inputs. I just just a couple of seconds before she would have blown the dandellion to a bare stick and I was pleading with her to hold still. I'll try it again with better light on her face. Thanks again!
     
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    Unfortunately the underexposure of your secondary subject, along with the shallow DoF, makes her look as if she has a Jimmy Durante "Schnozzola" under those raccoon eyes. A scrim camera left and a reflector camera right would have been to your benefit. Nice concept.

    Thanks for sharing.
     

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