Dandelion girl C&C welcome

[shuttervelocity]

First submission. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!


Suchi-dandellion by ksreera, on Flickr

 

[Trever1t]

While I like the concept I don't feel it was executed well. The girl is very under under-exposed, the crop is uncomfrotable with too much of her head chopped. A "potrait" orientation and some reflected light would have given this a drweamy summer day feel. Just my opinion

 

[shuttervelocity]

Thanks for your inputs. I just just a couple of seconds before she would have blown the dandellion to a bare stick and I was pleading with her to hold still. I'll try it again with better light on her face. Thanks again!

 

[kundalini]

Unfortunately the underexposure of your secondary subject, along with the shallow DoF, makes her look as if she has a Jimmy Durante "Schnozzola" under those raccoon eyes. A scrim camera left and a reflector camera right would have been to your benefit. Nice concept.

Thanks for sharing.