I love the concept, and the photo is beautifully captured, but I feel that the color palette doesn't work for me. To me the green and pink splashes really don't compliment the simple orange, cream and maroon palette, and are instead causing distractions from the good elements of the portrait.
Also, welcome to the forum! Don't let others bully you into letting them edit your photos, and remember that it is OK to disagree with a critique, no matter how upset or opinionated the person may be for you disagreeing with them. This forum has a few prommies who don't like artists and always have to be right and get highly offended and insulting if you don't agree with them, or if they simply think you are wrong about something. Your work is great, keep it up.