Daughter in window. C&C welcome

[CMfromIL]

I was taking pictures of yellowjackets flying around the deck, when I noticed my middle daughter peering out of the window watching me. I clicked off two quick pictures, then resumed my bug hunt. After I started PP on the bugs I also looked at her shots. I was pleased with the result.

Did some PP on it, thoughts?

 

[CMfromIL]

Adjusted the PP

 

[Sidro62]

Real nice and you should be pleased.Sid

 

[412 Burgh]

her right eye, our left, looks hazey, but maybe thats just me?

 

[AMOMENT]

ooh! I really like these!!!

 

[CMfromIL]

Yeah, only the furthest eye is in focus. Don't know if it was because I was wide open (2.8) and so close? I was about 8 feet away with my 70-200. Really just a quick grab, almost a throw away, but then I got to looking at it. Of course being my daughter I'm not quite as critical!

 

[g13a]

Tweaked exposure a bit,removed the shadows and some marks from her face.Hope you like it.

 

[Cpi2011]

Thanks a lot " g13a" now the photo looking so beautiful. Excellent editing.

 

[Heitz]

Ohhh, she's gonna be a heartbreaker!

 

[CMfromIL]

Thanks G13a, looks very good!

 

[g13a]

http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/members/105647.htmlCpi2011,CMfromIL Glad you like the editing.The original image itself speaks many things.
The subject,light and composition everything is perfect.

 

[The_Traveler]

Quite lovely but I think this was a bit yellow and greenish in spots and needed a bit more sharpening.

 

[edirik]

I think you need to be carefull about focusing then photoshop will work much better.