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Day 2...still learning

JustJessie

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These are a few of the shots from my second day of photography. C&C please. :)
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6.
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pretty good... but im not really feeling #2 but the rest are awesome.
 
I find that the first five lack something in substance.
The bottle seems lost, out of place.
The buildings lose my interest.

The last has nice usage of lines/symmetry ... except for the branches.
I find that #6 is the strongest.

Keep shooting everything, and keep thinking about what was so attractive about the shot ... and was it translated after you took the shot.
 
I think #4 and #6 are your strongest shots. Great composition with both of these =).

#1 and #2 Just aren't really interesting, either in color or b&w

#3 Is a decent shot, and the angle is much better than your first two photos

I would like #5 a whole lot more if you didn't blur out everything but the center, I'm pretty sure you did this in PP.
 

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