Death with a View - C&C Appreciated

[manaheim]

I've been having a rough time for years trying to make cemetary shots look as cool as the cemetary does when I'm standing there. Always seems challenging.

I'm curious what folks think of this one. As always, feel free to tear it apart if you feel appropriate. Thanks!

 

[Sw1tchFX]

I like the idea, but I just think there's too much in the frame, I think it needs to be simplified.

 

[zendianah]

I agree with the above poster.

 

[Chris of Arabia]

I'd say a slightly lower viewpoint would be better and get in closer, so we can read what's on them. The people that lie below those stones were once living human beings, give them a name.

 

[manaheim]

Good suggestions. I'll try playing with the crop a bit later tonight and see what that gets and re-post it.

As a side note... The pic looks a bit washed out on my monitor here at work... looked good to me at home. This monitor may be out of whack though... how does it look for you guys?