Deep Sea Fishing - Set 3 - C&C Welcome

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Hey, three! It's a trillogy. :)

Here are the other ones:
http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/s...d.php?t=137973

http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138065

So I think this is my final set. Curious to hear what people think, good or bad. Thanks, as always!

==1==
Into the Sun
Deep Sea Fishing Trip - Heading Out - 024.jpg


==2==
Silent Morning Watch
Deep Sea Fishing Trip - Heading Out - 027.jpg
 
I like the first one - the idea of the stone "dock" leading the eye towards the sun. Is the horizon even? It seems to be a bit crooked. Also, I'd suggest some cropping to get the horizon away from the center. How about this (didn't adjust the horizon though, but it definitively needs some adjustment):

Deep%20Sea%20Fishing%20Trip%20-%20Heading%20Out%20-%20024.jpg


EDIT: Or maybe like this:

Deep%20Sea%20Fishing%20Trip%20-%20Heading%20Out%20-%20024-1.jpg
 
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Oh yeah, I see what you're getting at. I like your first edit best. I'll try that.

I think the horizon is straight- I think that's an optical illusion from the combination of the rocks and the slight mountain or whatever on the right there.

Thanks for the comments!
 
I checked in Photoshop and the horizon is very slightly off. I know it's a small thing, but I still somehow notice it (although I never seem to notice it in my own shots...). I also prefer the first edit - the sky is more interesting than the water, and the whole scene gets a pleasant dynamic feeling.
 
im so impressed with the pictures..
 

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