Did my first photo shoot and I'm not pleased

[Jenn84]

Did my first photo shoot. Not paid of course. I'm not pleased with the results. Not sure what I did wrong. Can you take a look and tell me what I did wrong? I know people don't like clicking links but I want to show all the pictures to get an idea what I'm doing wrong. "Thanks" will follow.

Jim and Jen - TedTucker's Photos

not sure how to see these, it asked for a password...did I miss something?

 

[Arch]

Gief password plz

 

[reznap]

I think it's safe to pull the sheet over this thread.

 

[vtf]