Ok I wont say I have too much self portrait and not too much people picture in general because is something very, deeply personal. But here I am again, sharing another portrait
I don't like the way the hand under the chin looks, the one hair across the face is a bit distracting and the photo could benefit from a little sharpening. Also my eyes are drawn to the white in the background, I would suggest next time make sure there's nothing bright in the background. I really like the lighting in this picture and the way it brings out the brown in the eyes.
The background doesn't bother me much, but that one hair in your face is bugging me. I'm not sure about the crop, wish there was more of the top of your head. Good job nailing the focus on your eye
It's not about the camera, it's about the person using it. You can have the best camera in the world but if you don't know how to use it your pictures will not be good.
Nice photo, but I would remove the hair across the face.