Do you like this flower?

[pierrottweiler]

more pictures in my photoblog

 

[DRoberts]

I like your concept...just think the focus is off.

 

[BTilson]

I think it's a good attempt, but the composition is lacking, imho. Everything is too squared up and centered for my tastes.

 

[wchua24]

needs to improve but its kinda good..keep on practicing ..

 

[pierrottweiler]

ok, thanks for all your comments; I will keep on practicing!! and will also buy a new camera

 

[El2]

The second one is good, but seems to be on the cool side. Maybe warm it up and adjust contrast/hue/saturation to pop the color.

 

[jv08]

It's good! I like the 2nd one more.

 

[LaFoto]

Looks good, and with a flower like this, the centredness of the composition works perfectly well! Only focus/sharpness are still lacking a bit, but in the course of time, you'll master also that!

 

[pierrottweiler]

Hello and thank you for your comments!
Here is the second photo with changes in saturation/gamma
Do you prefer this version?

 

[yogibear]

Yes i prefer this version. However i believe that you could take a different angle and greatly increase the value of the composition. Im just not a fan of square straight on photos.

 

[epp_b]

I think you need a narrower depth of field, particularly the first one. The background is too distracting.