Panos are tough, and this one shows why. Everything looks so scrutched up. I understand that if you want more WIDTH, you have to sacrafice, but for example is that a crane on the far left? I would try and just get a wide angle photo of this starting a little bit to the left of the boat and ending around those dark buildings on the far right.
With that being said, its a cool idea, and looks pretty sharp from what I can tell.
Just my opinion.
Lets see what others say.