drastic occurences

[machinehater]

hey!
This is a well known effect. it is the first time i try to adopt it, can anyone give me some feedback how i can improve my work?




Thank you very much!
Armin

 

[H4X1MA]

I'm not a huge fan, I like the flame ones better. The only issue that I really see is the "break line" is too, umm, liney? I would break it up a bit more.

 

[machinehater]

Thank you for your comment!
Uhm, yes, you are right!
I used those brushes for aprox 2 hours, i should have go to bed and try another time tomorrow :-D

 

[machinehater]

Here is a new version.
Bedder?