Ealies Chau

[look_yau]

Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr



Ealies Chau by Johnny Leung ^^, on Flickr

 

[caseyrbrown]

All of them make the girl look great, save the one with ribs showing.

I think a lot would benefit from a tighter crop. She's your subject, and in some cases your composition dwarfs her in the frame. I think the first one is about as wide as I would go, but then again it is a little bit of personal preference.

Poses and lighting look good, except a few back-lit ones could use some fill.

 

[Granddad]

I agree with Casey. I'd add that she's gorgeous!

On a slightly different note, if you're looking for constructive criticism it's best if you post no more than 5 at a time, post them vertically (as you have done) and number the images for ease of reference.

P.S. I looked at a few of your portraits on Flickr - I LOVE "Girl with headphones." :thumbup:

 

[Derrel]

She's simply gorgeous. I wish a few of these were "talls" though.

 

[thebasedsloth]

Not a fan of the super loose crops.
and I don't like the feet being that close to the edge of the frame. They look chopped off at first glance.
Beautiful model though and the first bunch are great. Good poses.

 

[look_yau]

thanks all for comment. was trying a few different crop at the end to make is less normal/standard, didn't think/noticed about the feet tho.. well spotted