Been a long time since I've been to the gallery and made comments. Usually I just post in the themed threads. This has a very nice feel to it Josh. What would you think about in post processing, depending upon your editing app, of slightly darkening the right side of the image, to focus attention more on her cheek?
That edge of blanket is sorta sharp in focus, and with the contrast due to the bright parts of the edge, really draws the eye. Decreasing the brightness and therefore contrast there, might allow the viewer's eye to linger longer on your primary subject.
Depending upon your app, there are probably many ways of 'burning' and darkening that area.