Edited Monochromes (C&Cs are welcome)

[darkeinjel]

I would like to share these photos which were originally taken in monochrome. The rest of the colors were added using photoshop. any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

Added pink lips and green eyes

Sharpened and turned it into a sepia photo

Thanks in advance.

 

[knjrphoto]

I think the color added in photoshop should be removed. The color on the lips in the first one just doesn't look right and the 2nd image looks more yellow than sepia.

I also have trouble achieving a good looking sepia tone - I've only ever tried it because other people want it - I'm not a fan myself.

Also, in the first picture the model actually looks like she is choking.