Being a graphic artist who did many a catalogue I look at objects like this as something to illustrate in a favorable way so you might want to buy one. If you were after an electric bike would you be interested after seeing this shot? And in what way is it cartoonish?
I guess you'd have to know electric bicycles to know this is one. Aside from the rear hub looking a little more substantial than a normal bike, it looks pretty standard otherwise. In terms of an interesting shot,I'm not sure grey over grey helps it stand out. The foliage is pretty detailed and, imo, a simpler background would help.
Was this an experiment in tone mapping or did you find that the lighting dictated your decision for the combining of 3 exposures? Bring the bike forward a bit into the sun and you might get a more compelling image because the background will darken while exposing for the tones in the subject. Now this is just my opinion, but I think HDR may have defeated the image by putting to much competing details into the shadows.
I wouldn't read too much into the number of views

osts. I have seen many terrific images here with nary a sniff of a comment. If you want to look at the positive side, people may feel unworthy to offer comments. At least thats what I tell myself when my threads don't get any posts.:blushing: