Ellen: Today's Study. Lingerie ***Possible NSFW***

[Trever1t]

Just finished up a set with the sultry Ellen.


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[Rags]

You take a lot of time with your work and it's appreciated by the folks who see it.

I think being forthright might be helpful here...

The highlights on her artificial eyelashes are not beneficial to the shot

So she's not well endowed but her wonder bra is pushing up her bun to an unnatural look

The shot doesn't work for me

Did you ever try B&W one bulb shots with a reflector behind to get a high contrast back lit edge?

It might be a good experiment to get more mood or more seductive look

Rags

 

[Trever1t]

I'll give that a try, I haven't posted many B&W images.

 

[Trever1t]

Hopefully I redeem myself with this frame.


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[Rags]

Better, but imagine that in high contrast B&W....

Good work

Most people I know have sexual interludes in dark or semi dark areas giving rise (pun intended) to an association of darkness with the activity

So does less saturated subjects in semi darkness appear sexier... I dunno, maybe...

Rags

 

[Trever1t]

I dunno. I used to shoot film B&W (had a darkroom) and never even considered shooting in color...considered B&W to be the only true art form. Now I did look at this image in B&W (you put a bug in my ear) and just wasn't feeling it. The model likes B&W and asked me to do a few that way for her...perhaps I'll look at it again! Thanks for the honest and constructive critique, it's much appreciated.

 

[tirediron]

Very nice Trever; must that must be a tough course!

 

[Trever1t]

Thanks boss! I'm trying new things with my lighting. It would be more dramatic if my space wasn't a 12' reflector. Getting shadows in here is tough!

 

[Mach0]

Thanks boss! I'm trying new things with my lighting. It would be more dramatic if my space wasn't a 12' reflector. Getting shadows in here is tough!

Try grids on the soft box

 

[Trever1t]

I did, these are both taken with gridded SB main and 2 lights on BG. That's it.

 

[tirediron]

Thanks boss! I'm trying new things with my lighting. It would be more dramatic if my space wasn't a 12' reflector. Getting shadows in here is tough!

Buy some Wal-mart el Cheapo black or grey sheets and 'darken' a couple of the walls with 'em.

 

[Trever1t]

Buy some Wal-mart el Cheapo black or grey sheets and 'darken' a couple of the walls with 'em.

I thought about Velcro and black foam boards. Ceiling also. I might give that a shout.

 

[Trever1t]

One more?


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